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cuihao 发表于 2009-6-6 12:32:49

This Section looks much colder than others, let me practice my english writing

I am a junior high school student from Henan Experimental School in Zhengzhou, Henan, China. I have been computing for BOINC on my computer for 2 years. I think these BOINC projects have real meaning for human being.


   In last two years, I had a computer which had a Pentium 4 2GHZ CPU. It helped me get 8000 credits. Now I have a new 64bit computer at home. It has a dual-core CPU. Now, I have 20000 credits in all.

[ 本帖最后由 cuihao 于 2009-6-10 21:38 编辑 ]

Julian_Yuen 发表于 2009-6-6 17:16:48

单复数和主从句时态会被阅卷老师查的哦

cuihao 发表于 2009-6-10 19:26:10

修改了一处~~~

其他的请指正

Julian_Yuen 发表于 2009-6-10 20:09:36

好吧我英语也很烂，挑不出来什么毛病的

I think these BOINC projects....

Tynox 发表于 2009-6-10 20:42:28

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your translationg ability is better than me...

cuihao 发表于 2009-6-10 20:54:51

原帖由 Julian_Yuen 于 2009-6-10 20:09 发表 http://www.equn.com/forum/images/common/back.gif
好吧我英语也很烂，挑不出来什么毛病的

I think these BOINC projects....

很对呀，BOINC有许多项目，所以是projects，前面用了these，自然是复数。
（我的应试作文水平还是相当高的，初中至今14次月考（包括末考），英语作文只扣了0.5分）

Julian_Yuen 发表于 2009-6-10 21:01:08

回复 #6 cuihao 的帖子

but你漏掉了..

Julian_Yuen 发表于 2009-6-10 21:01:55

回复 #5 Tynox 的帖子

一想到学英文十多年还这样子，就很汗颜了.....拜一拜equn

cuihao 发表于 2009-6-10 21:34:06

失败了~~~
下星期三期末考试~~受了打击~~

Julian_Yuen 发表于 2009-6-10 21:43:32

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那还真是很对不住哇

cuihao 发表于 2009-6-11 22:17:00

没事，用我同学的话说，打击一下我的嚣张气焰。

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